A Little Creative Experiment

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  1. Boy, you’ve definitely given yourself a challenge! Besides have a certain number of syllables, the song also uses some syncopation, and some syllables are stressed more than others. To do that with your writing, you’d almost have to analyze how each word is said (which part is emphasized and how long it’s held). You could do it, but it’ll take a bit of time/effort. The passage is strong enough now that I’m not sure it needs the extra emphasis. 🙂

    1. Thank you so much for the insight! I didn’t realize how difficult this would be until I started trying it out. You’re right, I’d really have to go into deeper analysis of each word, and I do worry that it’ll take away from what I already have. Thank you again for the feedback 🙂

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